MMC Posted May 9, 2010 Report Posted May 9, 2010 I wrote this poem on behalf of our 11 year old son for his mother. He penned it on paper and gave it to her today for Mother's Day. They said we should share it on the forum...so here it is. Sorry, it is a little long. It is sort of a narrative poem, detailing events just before his PANDAS started. And highlights how he has depended on his mother to get him through much of this. She is a very special Mom, and am so glad she is the mother of my children, especially in light of all we have gone through this past year. My Mother My Comfort My mother My comfort My blessed comfort you are When I need you, you're never far You know Mom, this year has been hard But you are there, my steadfast guard I need you in times like no other And I am thankful to have you as mother You know Mom, I have been brave But to this illness, I am a slave Nurses, needles, machines and bags "Mama take me home", for I am sad Last night, I had a dream of a man with a time machine This tall, skinny man said with pride You can choose one passenger for this ride So I chose my father's bride Mom, where should we go? She began to ponder and wonder...and said Perhaps we should go far, far away To receive blessings of an ancient day We will search and search for Him Closer, closer, touch His cloak The touch will heal Enjoy the relief, the peace, and be still No...I do not believe this is meant to be For only in the future we will see Perfect healing of mind, body and soul Only to happen when we are old Perhaps we will travel back several days Over 365, before all the craze To a time of jubilation Before all the frustration Remember the trip son? Just you and I on the road We planned it for so long To see Third Day sing their songs "Yes", Mom I remember it well We met the band, then said farewell So much joy from beginning to end All before the strep set in And then life changed for me Mommy, I did not understand Why I could not keep still And all the strange things I would feel But your comfort for me was beyond measure This I will always treasure You held me close, I depended on you When dad did not know what to do Oh, I know he was there too Calling doctors left and right But, you Mom you Were there with me into the night When I could not, could not go to sleep When the PANDAS would run so deep Their teeth and claws biting, scratching with all their gall Those black and white monsters, I hate them all I'm feeling sleepy now Dear mother by my side To you, again I owe My comfort, my peace, and off to sleep I go Another morning, another day to dread No...my mother is here I said I will be brave, I will go to school Mom is nearby, she will stop the cruel You taught me Mom, we must move on To face each day, each new dawn Of one thing I am assured With you by my side, I can endure And I am thankful on this Mother's Day That I can say I'm feeling some better now And to this lady, I bow My Mother, my comfort My blessed comfort
mama2alex Posted May 9, 2010 Report Posted May 9, 2010 Just beautiful! This made me cry. Thank you for the Mother's Day gift!! What a great dad YOU are.
poetmom Posted May 10, 2010 Report Posted May 10, 2010 Heartfelt and touching. What a wonderful tribute to a beloved mother!
matis_mom Posted May 10, 2010 Report Posted May 10, 2010 How beautiful! My son is about the same age, and even though he hasn't said in so many words, I know he is going through pretty much the same. Funny thing is a lot of times he can't TELL me what is inside, but he has a much easier time WRITING about it. Isabel
earnestfamily7 Posted May 11, 2010 Report Posted May 11, 2010 very touching - as hard as it is for us mom's - it must pale in comparison to what the kids go through - thanks for sharing this
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